Vexation without representation.

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epsilonsmirror
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Vexation without representation.

Post by epsilonsmirror » Sun Jun 24, 2007 10:22 am

A vexation to be sure.
The problem would be is a kill worth a cure.
Is the envelope worth the message.
Is the fire worth its visage?
Iam not sure so I will take the path of least damage.
I can conjure a cold,the flu and such.
But I cant conjure healing very much.
However I will be this way for awhile.
If I dont have power at least I have style.
It cant be an affinity that I dont sink.
But my best is out there to keep everyone in the pink.

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SphinxsDancer
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Post by SphinxsDancer » Mon Jun 25, 2007 1:22 am

wow you are really good... do you write alot?

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Post by epsilonsmirror » Mon Jun 25, 2007 7:54 am

yes I do.
Thank you for the kind words.

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Post by suzisco » Tue Jun 26, 2007 12:00 pm

I like the poem, love the title!

Suzi

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SphinxsDancer
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Post by SphinxsDancer » Wed Jun 27, 2007 7:58 pm

well  my advise to you is never give up writing... have you ever considered publishing you poems?

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Post by epsilonsmirror » Sat Jun 30, 2007 8:14 am

thank you,yes I have had five of my poems published in various anthologies.
never made first place but I was good enough to be considered.

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