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Tamalyn
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Poetry

Post by Tamalyn » Sat Aug 02, 2008 11:41 am

May I Love You

May I love you
Please do not ask how
I will love you no matter what

To love you as a friend
To love you as a lover
I will have to love you less than what I do now

To love you from afar
Would be unfair for both of us
You will not know, I would not be able to tell you

To admire you
Would mean that I look up to you
Respect you for who you are

I want everyone to know about you
I want to keep you all to myself
I want you to know me
I want to know more about you

I love the way you walk
The way you bite you lower lip
The way you smell
The way you look at me
The way you smile
The joy I hear when you laugh
The sweet sound of your voice
The shape of your eyes
The softness of your caress
The way your mouth moves
The way your chest move when you breathe
Your body is perfect in all ways

I love you
Yet I ask for permission to love you
If you so no
I will brake, but my feeling will still stay the same
If you say yes
I will be overcome with joy and cherish you more
Whatever happens
Whatever you say
You alone will have my undying love

So if I may

Can I love you

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jigyasu
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nice

Post by jigyasu » Sat Aug 02, 2008 12:56 pm

cool
u might like this video. "reflections of a skyline"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V08Mt35MSis
check it out.

Tamalyn
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Thanks

Post by Tamalyn » Sat Aug 02, 2008 2:48 pm

Thank you for the link.

I enjoyed it.

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prasanna
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Location: DUBAI, Los Angeles, Chennai

Post by prasanna » Thu Aug 28, 2008 9:21 am

Can I call u a lovely poet?  Thanks for sharing your wonderful  love poem here, lovely poet.  I really enjoyed ur lovely  and gentle words of expression of ur true love    and  understood,  your deep love towards  the lucky girl too.   Do share more your poems here.  All the very best.

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