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Cosmic Kiss

Post by Deeperpoet » Sun Aug 24, 2008 10:21 am

Cosmic Kiss

Well good greetings and great tidings to all of you that are there.
And how hast thy been in my absence of your complete presence?
I on the other hand have been extremely busy in my own anomaly.
All walks of life shake my hand as guaranteed my heart they wear.
I came and lived amongst their existence but it all needs guidance.
Spellbound or cast down was my stone of resolution automatically.
So I took it to another continent and threw it cascading on the lake.
As I watched it rippling across the waves, my last wish I did make.

Lucky for me because right then this Star fell from way up high.
Sparks of fire shooting through the skies and a tail that followed.
It actually burned my eyes and planted a cosmic kiss of pure bliss.
The wind grabbed me around my waist and took away every sigh.
And the clouds fluffed up catching in my throat until I swallowed.
All through me went the clouds and air with a hiss surely to miss.
Swept away in electromagnetic dust of cosmic rays lies my wish.
Charging through the atmosphere atop a brand new satellite dish.


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Post by Crow » Sun Aug 24, 2008 11:48 am

:smt038 This one, lol, what can I say?  Wonderful thought that brought a smile to my face.


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Post by Rohiniranjan » Tue Aug 26, 2008 1:33 am

Happens all the time and repeatedly...
Kiss is but the mouth meeting its source of satiety
Be it a beloved's lips
or a caressing of a gold medal won in Olympics!

Cosmic Kiss though is different...
It's mother reaching down and tenderly kissing the feeding infant
Who is busy, half-asleep but noisily kissing ...
The source of his sustenance ...!


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Post by prasanna » Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:52 am

Dear Ranjanda,

              WOW!       You have A Golden  , Cosmic KISS from  "MAA SARASWATHI " indeed.

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Post by prasanna » Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:57 am

Dear   Ann Rich,    Beautiful  poem, thanks for sharing.

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Post by Rohiniranjan » Thu Aug 28, 2008 11:44 pm

prasanna wrote:Dear Ranjanda,

              WOW!       You have A Golden  , Cosmic KISS from  "MAA SARASWATHI " indeed.
Saraswati would be DIDI, not MA! :-)

why this extra 'H' in the way you wrote Her name? A typo or some tantrik form?

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Post by prasanna » Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:22 am

Dear Ranjanda,


             I agree  Devi Saraswathi is Didi , and not MAA.  I recollected the relationship of Devi and Devathas now. Sorry.


        We in South India , use, Thi for all names. (esp Tamilians)  Example  we write, Shanthi, Vasanthi, Jeyanthi, Revathi, Sumathi .So there is no such  Tantrik connections exists, I think.I dont know , the exact usage of this  H here . Let us wait for some scholars to clarify this.  

 Cosmic  Kiss is  a true   Bliss ( I think. ) .... to kiss and to be kissed.


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