Stars in heaven where have you gone?

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Third Dan
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Stars in heaven where have you gone?

Post by Third Dan » Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:27 pm

Stars in heaven where have you gone?

I saw none

A dream
A sunny day I walked into a white building
Inside it was empty and desolate
Save for large pipes somewhat rusted by time

Perhaps pipes containing water
Water of life
TRUTH

I slowly climbed the metal stairs
When suddenly I began to float upwards
Struck by fear
I blurted out "God is Great"

I left the planet and hovered above it
The sun was behind me
To my left I saw light of white heading this way
A long awaited spirit perhaps?
It was as large if not larger than this planet

There were no stars to be seen in the sky
Why?
If our general planetary vicinity gets encapsulated
We can't see star light.

Nothing gets in
Nothing gets out
In other words there is no escape


Perhaps something has been lurking for quite some time here
Spirit or group of spirits that do not belong

We can't stop or control them
But I sense something good our way comes that can




Third Dan


Daniel 12-13 "But go thou thy way till the end be; and thou shalt rest, and shalt stand up to thy lot, at the end of the days.'
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Third Dan
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Post by Third Dan » Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:28 pm

Poem rewritten

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Post by Third Dan » Tue Jan 13, 2009 5:42 am

. :)

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