Tears of Suffering

[p3ntacle]

Tears of suffering
Dropping from these eyes
A vision, from star speckled skies
Light in the darkness beyond
Mad tests of machinery
Inspiration evolving from light
Out of desperate melancholia
Dreams of awakened minds
Despite these drunken maladies
Oh ill advised youth
Time entrenched men of war
Despised truth, can we give in
to the good we were given?
What are we crying for?

[symulhaque]

Really a very nice poem. thank you for sharing.

[injoyslife]

It is 2022 giving my reply to your poem submitted in 2013,
wondering if you'll ever know. just the same I hope your still writing and
sharing with the world. Because this one is Very well done as it touches
across the whole of humanity. Joy