Long Gone

[reichild]

A word spoken

A love felt

and lost

and gone

and far beyond repair.

A man of tender words

and heartfelt promises.

Few of which were meant
or met.

A day gone

A promise forgotten

A small piece of love
lost

Untill it is no more.

(C) 1996

[suzisco]

Oh I felt the pain, very emotive.

Thank you.

Suzi XXX

[Rohiniranjan]

Beautiful -- RC!
I hope you like what I am posting, perhaps in the same vein :-)

DREAMS? TO => REALITY!
=================

Gossamer, my dreams are woven from,
 waving in winds of destiny

Imagination colors my existence
and takes me away
 from one drab dream
  to evanescent another

Will you be the dewdrop
that will settle on my diaphanous web,
 quenching its timeless thirst, for a shy moment
  Before shattering it, forever?


Rohiniranjan (c) 1996





[quote="reichild"][b]A word spoken[/b]

A love felt

and lost

and gone

and far beyond repair.

A man of tender words

and heartfelt promises.

Few of which were meant
or met.

A day gone

A promise forgotten

A small piece of love
lost

Untill it is no more.

(C) 1996[/quote]

[BamaMystic]

Nicely done.

[Danny]

oops

[reichild]

Thanks for the poem RR, thanks for the coment Bama Mystc and Danny for the insight (i myself do not believe in making promises-lest they make a liar of me!)