A poem about life

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applebee
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A poem about life

Post by applebee » Fri Aug 08, 2008 9:02 am

Life

sadness
sets my heart on fire

madness
meets my eyes

chaos
carries my life away

but

love
will heal my world

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prasanna
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Post by prasanna » Thu Sep 04, 2008 9:34 am

Dear Santana,

            I love your poem on Life. Yes U are rite. Love heals anybody . Love is the very essence of life.  Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. I already posted my  appreciations on your  your  lovely poem, but the bugs in the  site  eroded my post totally that day . Do post more  your poems please.



Regards,

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applebee
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thanks

Post by applebee » Sat Sep 06, 2008 10:15 pm

hi prasanna,

thanks for the feedback. there"ll be more but most of my poems are in german have to translate them at first :-)
have a nice day bee

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Post by prasanna » Sat Sep 13, 2008 6:42 am

Dear Santana,

              you are very welcome. Please try to translate all your German poems , so that we can have the Nector.of  Apple ( from ur poetries.) Rite ,  Apple Bee ?

         I saw now  100 viewers for your poem, I can confidently say , u are touching the hearts of many through  your simplicity in poetry.So go ahead.  I am also  a poetess ,  but I do write  in my language Tamil. So I love to read all my co -poets in this forum.All are lovely.

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dear prasanna

Post by applebee » Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:23 pm

I had a look at yours but my tamil is a bit short not to say i do not have a clue which is a shame the letters look lovely have a nice day yours applebee

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