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Crow
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Post by Crow » Thu Aug 28, 2008 5:04 am

Is there no peace
For great a man
A humbled spirit
I do all that I can

Awaken sleepy head
Look and see
All that you are
And all that you'll be

My beloved
You are very old
I remember
Your heart is very cold

Lonely I await
For the day you will see
My love eternal
The way you once loved me

Anger fills your heart
While I see
Jealousy tears it apart
Come back to me

Will there be any peace
For a great man
I am your love
Doing the best I can

When you look at me
And speak so hatefully
Do you not see
It is you not me

You hate what you are
Jealous that I am not sad
Doing your best to
Make my heart feel bad

Faithfully I stayed
My heart is true
All these lives
I return to you

No matter what you say
No matter what you do
We are eternal
My love for you

For once a child
I laughed no more
You hurt me
I walked out the door

Memories pull me
I return yet again
To fullfill my destiny
To do all I can

Beloved spirit
Lover of mine
Show a little kindness
And all shall be fine

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Post by prasanna » Thu Aug 28, 2008 5:44 am

Dear friend,

             lovely poem on beloved, I too can say , love and friendship is eternal  ever. Thanks for your lovely poem. keep going. Share more. I wish, beloved should never depart, or detach. But the separation and waiting has its own joy too, once again meeting or reunion of  beloveds  brings more happiness, which cant be measured or expressed in words.  During that time ,only tears fills the  words. Have u ever,  experienced this ?



with luv and hugs,

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Post by Crow » Thu Aug 28, 2008 5:50 am

Prasanna,

Thank you for your kind words. I have experienced the sorrow of seperation, and the joyful union. They say that absence makes the heart grow fonder. I don't know, it kinda made mine break.  But the kisses taste sweeter and the embrace that much more powerful. Do you agree?

Safe Journey

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Post by prasanna » Thu Aug 28, 2008 5:58 am

My dear friend,

           But the kisses taste sweeter and the embrace that much more powerful. Do you agree?


                       I agree with u fully dear, You are 200% correct.



with lots of hugs,

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