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~ * The ~*~ Fae ~*~ Enchantress * ~

Post by daizyblackrose » Fri Dec 05, 2008 9:47 pm

Monday, April 14, 2008

1:31 PM - (Part 2 of Morning Star.)

(This my minds answer to my Morning Star ~ Night Star poem/song.)

~ * The ~*~ Fae ~*~ Enchantress * ~

                 ~~~ * ~~~

I fell into your life like an angel falling from your dreams, never quite real to your waking mind.

But real enough to touch, ……..love, ………& hold in your waking state.

I told you…….you would think of me always, even when I've gone.

You'd long for me, ….. Cry, ……….. howl, ………… go mad with passion & seek me out again & again.

Just to hold, love, & touch.

Your Fae enchantress of beauty fair & magical allure is what I am.

To you & the world 'am not one in the same, you see the enchantress & a creature of undeniable beauty.

Mere mortals see a girl, a dreamer on the brink of madness.

But they'll never know the truth, cause they'll never look beyond the mask they see in front of them.

Too afraid of what lays on the other side, too afraid that what they'd find is everything they desired, too afraid of themselves.

So tonight I call out to you, ……'will you come my love & join me beyond the mist & time.'

Cause your forever mine even if you denied me, your mortal heart will fall every time to my call & song as long I want.

To love me is to let go of all worries & risk all or die trying.

To denied me after you've taken a taste is to live in madness & misery.

I told you…….you would think of me always, even when I've gone.

You'd long for me, ….. Cry, ……….. howl, ………… go mad with passion & seek me out again & again.

Just to hold, love, & touch.

Your Fae enchantress of beauty fair & magical allure is what I am.

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Post by Crow » Sat Dec 06, 2008 5:53 am

This one I liked very much. :smt003

From reading your other poems I thought some would make good lyrics.  As to what I see when I am reading the poems, lol... I'm soooo out of it right now I'm lucky to see the screen in front of me.  I know you had mentioned in another post that you liked to hear what people see if they get any impressions.  This one was very alluring.  

Safe Journey

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Thanks.

Post by daizyblackrose » Sat Dec 06, 2008 5:21 pm

Thanks very much for the reply.

I have posted on my Myspace blog page too, but no one replies to them on there at all.  

But no writing is a it thing in my family.(moms side that is)
I also write harry potter fanfics from time to time, tho only one of them is completely done.
I post them on fanfiction.net under the pen name of Daizy Blackrose of Slytherin.
For those who care to look.

Always Daydreaming,

Daizy.

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